The nurse told me the team could arrange a brief visit.
I followed her down the corridor, afraid to walk too quickly in case she changed her mind.
Daniel started after us.
The nurse turned slightly.
“We'll let you know when another person can come in.”
He stopped.
I looked back at him.
“I'll tell you what I can when I come out.”
He nodded.
For once, he did not follow me or try to make the decision for me.
The nurse explained what I would see before opening the door.
She spoke gently and gave me time to ask questions.
I barely heard half of what she said.
I was thinking about Lily's tiny hand, the one that had curled against my shirt when I carried her through the house.
Then I stepped inside.
The room was full of equipment I did not know how to name. The sounds were steady and unfamiliar, and the light seemed harsher than the yellow lamp at home.
Lily lay in the bed.
She looked impossibly small.
I moved closer, following the nurse's instructions about where I could stand and what I could touch.
“Hi, sweetheart,” I whispered.
My voice broke on the second word.
I had imagined saying so many things to her when she was born.
I had imagined telling her about the world, showing her the window in her room, and watching her grow into a child who would ask questions I couldn't answer.
I had never imagined standing beside her in a hospital, afraid to move my hand without permission.
The nurse showed me where I could rest my fingers gently.
I touched Lily's hand.
It was still her hand.
That small familiar detail nearly undid me.
“Mommy's here,” I whispered.
I did not know whether she could hear me.
I said it anyway.
I told her I loved her.
I told her I was staying.
I did not promise that everything would be all right because I could not make that promise honestly.
I stayed until the nurse explained that the team needed room to continue its work.
I bent toward Lily as far as I was allowed.
“I'll come back when they let me.”
Then I stepped away.
The hallway seemed even brighter when I returned.
Daniel stood as soon as he saw me.
“Did you see her?”
I nodded.
“How is she?”
“Still critical.”
He covered his mouth with one hand.
I could see that he was trying not to fall apart in front of me.
I no longer felt responsible for keeping him steady.
He was Lily's father. He was allowed to be frightened.
But I was not required to comfort him at the expense of my own fear.
He sat down beside me.
“I'm glad you got to see her,” he said.
“So am I.”
He waited, then asked, “Can you tell me what it was like?”
I considered the question.
“She looks very small.”
His eyes filled.
“I keep thinking about how small she was when we brought her home.”
I looked at him.
“So do I.”
For a while, we sat quietly.
Then Daniel asked whether I wanted him to bring me something to eat.
I told him I wasn't hungry.
He asked if I wanted water.
I said yes.
He returned with a bottle and set it beside me without insisting I drink.
It was a small thing.
I appreciated it, but I did not mistake it for a solution.
The officer came back later to clarify a detail in my statement. He asked whether Patricia had struck me with an open hand or a closed fist.
“An open hand,” I said.
He asked where I had been standing and whether anyone else had been in the hallway.
I answered as carefully as I could.
He explained that he was documenting what each person had reported and that he could not tell me what the final outcome would be.
I understood.
I wanted a clear answer, but the officer could not give me one simply because I was desperate for certainty.
When he finished, I asked whether I would need to speak with someone again.
He said it was possible and that I should keep the contact information he had provided.
I folded the paper and placed it inside my purse.
The paper felt ordinary.
The fact that I needed it did not.
Patricia approached while I was putting the purse away.
“May I speak to you?”
I looked at Daniel, then back at her.
“You can speak here.”
She glanced toward the people sitting nearby.
“Not in front of everyone.”
“I don't have anything to hide.”
Her expression tightened.
“I don't want strangers hearing our family business.”
I felt something inside me become very still.
“Lily's injury isn't a family secret.”
Patricia looked as though I had slapped her.
She opened her mouth, then closed it.
Daniel stepped closer.
“Mom, she has already told the police what happened. You need to respect that.”
Patricia turned on him.
“You make it sound as if I'm the only person who has ever made a mistake.”
Daniel's face changed.
“This wasn't a spilled drink or a rude comment. You hit Emily while she was holding our baby.”
Patricia looked down.
“I know what I did.”
“Then stop asking her to protect you from it.”
She stood there for a moment, gripping her purse.
I saw the struggle in her face, the effort to find a way to make the conversation less painful for herself.
Then she walked back to her chair.
I did not follow her.
Daniel sat beside me again.
“I should have said that sooner.”
“Yes,” I said.
He nodded without asking me to reassure him.
That evening—or what felt like evening, although I had lost track of the hours—the hospital staff brought me another update.
Lily remained in critical condition. They were continuing to monitor her and provide care, but they could not give me a reliable prediction.
I listened to every word.
I asked what I needed to ask.
Then I returned to the waiting area.
I kept the officer's paper in my purse and the bottle of water beside my chair.
Those were the only things I could organize.
The rest was beyond me.
I wanted to go back into Lily's room. I wanted to take her home. I wanted to wake up and discover that the entire night had been a terrible dream.
Instead, I sat beneath the hospital lights and waited for the next honest answer.
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